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My dearest friend:
you’ve made me smile when I’ve never wanted to again
with full grins of your own that burst with glow like small planets
or Japanese lanterns, lit with incense for luck.

You know, I’ve overheated
to supernova at times, like when you sweetly took my hands
in yours and kissed me quick after a soft, slow dance
that you wrapped me into, eyes sparkling.
You’re always warm as the richest of local honey, blushing
and dripping off the ends of our tea spoons.

Thank you, darling,
for taking me into your soothing love so completely,
complementing me like lavender to hot water, even when
I’m difficult. Every woman should be so lucky
to come upon such a bright, bouncing star
in her ever open expanse of deep night sky.
A poet I read a while ago had an interesting prompt idea: write a love poem for a friend. This is my official attempt! A love poem I wrote on the road today for one of my very best friends (:iconkujjles:) Thank you for putting up with me and being there for me. You are so amazing and I don't know what I'd do without you. ^^ Emote - Kitty glomp 

Please let me know what you think. Suggestions for improvement always welcome. I experimented with the rambling style again here, and uneven stanzas. How did I do? Are there parts that are too rambly? 

© Hannah Ree Banfill, July 4 2014. All rights reserved. Steal and I break your face. 
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Kujjles Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student General Artist
<3 <3 <3
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Kujjles Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student General Artist
I can't tell you how honored I am that you used your talents to write something like this for me ;__; <3
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WolfxButterfly Featured By Owner Edited Jul 5, 2014  Student Writer
I'm so glad you like it! <3
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